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Closed for Mourning

Tears of profound regrets,
deeply rooted remorse
denying disparity
memories negating dreams
lividly fearing
stepping what's beyond
love's closed doors

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prompt; avoidance


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20 words

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  • Grey Mouser
    July 14, 2008

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    When the doors become closed it is usually for a good reason and stepping through them once again takes immeasurable courage. Wonderful imagery and feeling, many thanks for entering into the contest.
    Be well and be blessed,
    Mouser


  • Desire gold member
    July 12, 2008
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    Powerful~

    Excellent take on the prompt and done so in 20Words
    Love the words: deeply rooted remorse~

    The images grab also the message You brought forth
    Your Title speaks volumes

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~