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Let You Down

If I ever thought love didn't exist
I was probably right
'Cause now without your kiss
I'm starting to feel like:

You're not worth it
I don't need it
So it's goodbye
I'm sorry,
I let you down
You're just not the one for me
So don't cry baby

These days don't go by as long
As they used to, with you
And it feels like i'll move on

Sweet, sweet Juliet
Without her Romeo
Hope she never will forget
How he let her go

Will she sit at night
With tears in her eyes
But you know one day
She'll realize

You're not worth it
She doesn't need it
So it's goodbye
She's sorry,
She let you down
She says: you're just not the one for me
So don't cry baby

And she said: I wanna be famous
He said: me too
She says: I wanna see the world
He said: Can you see me there with you?

I always thought love didn't exist
And I was right
'Cause now without your kiss
I know I'm going to be all right.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 13, 2008
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    Welcome to AllPoetry!

    This has lyrical qualities, and I think would be awesome put to music. Well done with this in both words and feeling.

    Welcome to AP. If you have any questions or need help with anything, feel free to IM me.
    Keep expressing through writing.
    Storm
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