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Lost in a universal thought

Dwelling with a false abode of comfort
Denying the reality of that which exist
This existence
of a facade of emotion and dedication
Towards that which perceives comfort as peace
From violence
Yes, this facade of happiness, trust and devotion
Keeps us sedated
Purchased masks of piety brings no revelation
To any questions
That will be revealed to the secular multitude
Yet the false prophets Multiplying
to those that will listen
Never revealing the scars existing beneath their disguises
Their venal reproach
Disgusted and disguised by fear and loathing of their own inadequacies 
They fear you, yet you see not that trickery
Promoting the embracing of that which is negative
to join the crowd of mutual pessimist
Your blindness makes this choice
Choices to conform
Denying the universe its place within you
Satisfying the social Darwism that permeates though society
Feeding off the young and the unborn
Moving the debt and destruction forward and beyond
She speaks
Raising the hell fires in the West
Burning greed to be reborn in another’s image
She speaks
Flooding the plains of the mid west
Speaking to those who thought isolation was the key to self preservation
She speaks
Through signs of sickness and death
Poisoning the provisions of substances to awaken our inner self to
A universe from within
Can you hear her? 
Or Does she reveal her self as him?
The protector, the warrior
A monarch against those that will and can do us wrong
He screams out with wars and rumors of war
Speaking of fear and Greed
Leaving you in a mental state of disorientation
So you embrace that which seems right
In a wrong way
Still
You return to the status quo of conforming to the multitude
Lemmings satisfying their craving of comfort  and the next
Alert
While the house around you falls.
Its not call called home any more
Your home was stolen when you were to told you have 5 years to sell
Greed speaks in many tongues
Home exist where comfort surrounds the exterior and from within
We lost our homes by choosing a house
Denying truth
Denying the universe because it has no form to our liking
It doesn’t  share the color, gender, race or religious preference
Of our liking
Yet, the universe still exist without our acknowledgment
The universe is the fabric of all
Know that which binds us is the seen
And the unseen
Tear down the mask of conformity.
We exist to evolve
So
Lets

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writing a poem and this came out. not really a poem but couldn't structure it. Honest opinions only. Good, bad or indifferent

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not really a poem but some really deep thoughts

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  • rhondasail
    December 9, 2008

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    Defining words...

    Denying truth
    Denying the universe because it has no form to our liking
    It doesn’t share the color, gender, race or religious preference
    Of our liking
    Yet, the universe still exist without our acknowledgment
    The universe is the fabric of all
    Know that which binds us is the seen
    And the unseen
    Tear down the mask of conformity.
    We exist to evolve
    So
    Lets


    Oh my yes...Let's! Bravo!...Whatever was in your heart and soul , Michael?...You struck the Universal We with this one...Excellent! Peace always, Rhonda


    • Mykeee
      December 10, 2008
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      - I have no idea. I've been reading books from Deepak Chopra and Dr. Hawkins and this spilled out. So LOL!! its what wanted to be said _ thanks so much for understanding it


  • TheClimb
    July 13, 2008

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    Like WOAH

    Sometimes, my friend, it's like that...we write about stuff that we didn't even know was on our mind. AMAZING poem, wow your perception on the way of the world is just mind-blowing. You wrote about the troubles of the world as they are today 'n personally, I agree with you. A lot of our problems are because of poor leadership which comes as a result of this, "every man for himself" theory. You wrote nothing but the truth 'n your thoughts definitely needed to be expressed. Keep 'em coming...powerful write!

    Pear


  • Ephiphany
    July 12, 2008

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    The best non-poems

    are those that we feel at the moment the ink starts to flow from our minds onto paper. This is wonderful, and in all honesty something that needed to be heard or written. Indeed we are in need of REPAIR, still we continue on in things that are not...feel me?
    I really enjoyed this, and I can't wait for another one of your moment surface again. Feel free to pen those as well Love this one too.

    Enjoy your weekend,
    CoCo


  • ennovy silver member
    July 11, 2008

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    Masterful Write

    I find these words true, and you have spoken open and honest what many of us know. The world as it is needs major repair. Our leaders are blind by choice, and the book of Revelations paints this picture as well...only you my artist son, used you words vividly, so in order to triumph we must first replenish our hearts, souls with the key....Knowledge is power and your brillance is showing here..... Mom

    • Mykeee
      July 11, 2008

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      Thanks ma - it was just what you said. we are in need of some major repair and God is trying to speak to us in so many ways and greed keeps its dirty hands around the necks of the week. even the weak that are wealthy. It was a bit of frustration as you can tell. Thanks for understanding ya son

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