Agnostic fear
Forced within the wounds
To stand beneath the flesh
For eternity
Sweet silencing of worlds
Locked deep within my tomb
Hearts race with opens words
For a false reality
Hearts racing
Decaying
Man will try
To love
Author notes
'love is a lie'
its not that dark i spoze
A contest entry
- The Beautiful Dark by Spiritual Soul.
1300 points, ended July 22, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i can take it.... forever
Comments
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ooh
this was good! it wasn't all dark, it was deep tho! keep penning! 
AWESOME
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wait wait i forgot to applaud!
lol xx
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=D
i think its amazing.
love the last stanza!
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It is a bit dark, but not so much what I was looking for. But this was a wonderful poem! I really liked it, very deep, wonderful words. Thanks for your entry!
Blessings,
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lol yeah, i thought not after i wrote it but decided to enter anyway.
thanks anyhoo
dann
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