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Beautiful Girl

Beautiful Girl

By: Quavadis L. Taylor

 

 

I like it when our skin touches

It makes me feel so good.

It feels like heaven when we kiss

I would slaughter for your love

You know I will.

You make me so lost at my will

When I am the strongest of deep flesh

Everything about you make me wonder

What’s next

My list of wishes begins with

I love you

When we kiss

You keep me guessing

What’s next

Is it you

The most beautiful girl

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  • D Saul So Sexy
    July 18, 2008

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    damn make a nigga cry then damn! thats whats up you got this young love thing on lock here your girl give you good inspiration i like that hell you are king with these lyrics


  • LunaSilverStars
    July 11, 2008

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    and you have no comments on this? how strange.
    i actually think this is well written. oh, the days of young love, how i used to miss them.. makes me picture a park or a beach, holding hands sort of thing.
    keep up the good work, hope to see more from you.