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The Meeting

Her dark presence was more like a shadow,
for she wore her fortitude with Sunday hands
and listened to the way the wind told her secrets,
something far away in her eyes.


I was the path myself,
always loving the turn and curve,
flying towards and away from the soft call
of her breathing.


The path was the adventure,
after the tedious drive with window eyes;
it made the sound of hoof beats,
called the wild horses from behind rocks
and pushed me from the places where
to stop was to be caught looking
with something far away in my eyes.

I stopped...



 

 

 

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A contest entry for: ~ Fine line between ~

Quote: "My life has been full of terrible misfortunes,
most of which never happened." -Michel de Montaigne

Now, tell me something that did.

Basically, this is an on going story...
I'll let you know how it ends.

Picture: "Until We Meet Again, Man Kissing Lady's Hand"
Type: Art Print. Courtesy of "PhotoBucket"


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  • Rowan gold member
    July 13, 2008

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    I'm all for happy endings, though I think I've become more cynical in me old age.
    S2 was beautiful.
    I wonder about the second line in S1, reading out loud it seemed a bit wordy. Maybe you don't need 'quiet' as it's
    reflected in Sunday. I think. Small nit. lol.
    Anyway, beautiful and hopeful, god knows we can all use that. lol. Thanks for entering!

  • garde a l eau
    July 12, 2008

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    Nicky, I had a friend who used to stop--"looking with far away in his eyes" as if he had left the room, but was still standing next to me. It would suddenly make me feel as if I were an invader.

    The way you weave the faraway and nearness into something aching and wild, left a lump in my throat, for those places in mind where we escape into a beautiful adventure, and all the things we don't say.

    An on-going story? I hope so! ~K


  • Cannonsfire
    July 11, 2008

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    Oh this is gorgeous and makes me want to find you a happy ending lol I hope it will have one for it deserves it. Love, C