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Mystic

The full moon, shivering the dead leaves that have not yet fallen.
Casting light on the paths undiscovered.
Chills throwing through the mild forest wind.
No sounds are heard except for the occasional cry of a lonely wolf.

The small streams like veins flowing through the hollow, naked ground. 

Under the thin mist, old tangled roots and dust from a thousand thoughts.

Every creature staring, helpless in the night.

Mist holding secret that nobody will be able to hear, nor want to. 

A cry of another wolf, asking, pleading to the light consumed with darkness.

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 20, 2008
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    great imagery. wonderfully penned. best of luck in the contest


  • Spiritual Soul
    July 17, 2008

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    Wonderful write, very dark and mysterious. There was such great imagery in this piece, it was written very well. Thanks for your entry!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • chedli
    July 13, 2008
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    thank you (:


  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 12, 2008

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    Great imagery created! How sweet... somebody made a poem about my natural habitat of perfection (LOL). Lovely terms incorporated within the context and the story it conveys is exceptionally imaginative.
    Good work!!!


  • Mrs. Moretti
    July 11, 2008
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    Wow. I love this. Good luck in the contest. This is surely among the best.

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