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I Think

I'm sick
I'm sick of all this abuse
I'm sick of all this hurt
I'm sick of wishing, hoping, dreaming
I'm sick

I'm mad
I'm mad at all the lies
I'm mad at all the truths
I'm mad at everyone, everything, everywhere
I'm mad

I'm dead
I'm dead when you ask me my oppinion
I'm dead when I'm expected to feel
I'm dead when I breath, blink, sleep
I'm dead

I'm happy
I'm happy looking at the past
I'm happy looking at the future
I'm happy feeling sad, mad, dead
I'm happy...
I think.

A contest entry

Just tell me what you think.

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  • etoile
    July 11, 2008

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    i really didn't like the repetition. but i did like the idea behind it. it basically shows a whole set of different emotions. good take on the contest title/prompt.

    thanks and goodluck


  • aanika
    July 11, 2008

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    alright.
    i like the idea and the emotion.
    but i hate the repetition and the cliche lines.
    sorry, but i don't think that this poem is right for this contest.