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Out of Body

Foreign matter flows within
a pulse
beating out silent tunes
something calls me


I ignore...

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15 words

Prompt- Somewhere in the real world

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  • Alyzeh
    September 26
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    Wow. I always find it so difficult to write down what I'm feeling in a few words. You do it so easily. Amazing work! I love what I'm reading so far!

  • Elisabeth Strange
    September 2
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    Grats on your gold trophy sis!


  • Gypsy-Princess gold member
    July 11
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    deeply engaging and meaningful... x