Dread delves into disaster
as hurt weights weary breath,
our union now is over
and I caused its sudden death.
That afroman...too tempting
and I just couldn't say no,
but now I am regretting
that you have to let me go.
No air escapes your sorrow
as silence stares through solemn eyes;
pain prepares to face tomorrow
as I cause you to despise.
Good lookin lust paid daring
on the steps of somewhere strange
and this crazy bitch was sharing
in two lives she'd rearranged.
Now sorry seems so futile
as betrayal breaks love's spell;
lost in this moment for awhile,
till I plunged you into hell.
You reel at my confessions-
my 4 in the morning tales
of my hump-de-bump profession
and of all that it entails.
Your baby girl went walking
through another's open door;
no thought for your suffering,
as I planned one meeting more.
Your face now swims in agony,
yet you take it like a man
as our love turns into anarchy
in destiny's bigger plan.
Author notes
1)No Air
2)Sorry
3)Hey Good Lookin =Jimmy Buffett
4)Afroman
5)Crazy Bitch
6)Baby Girl
7)Lost in this Moment
8)The Open Door = Evanescence
9)Take it like a Man
9)4 in the Morning
10)Hump-de-Bump = Red hot Chilli Pepper
(you have 2 number 9's, so I just included them both)
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Excellent poem . You did exactly what I wanted done.. Thank You so very much.. i really enjoyed this write.
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