(Female)Your touch is ecstasy……..
(Male) You Make me Feel the Urge,…
You make me feel your Passion,
My emotions Clash,
When I feel our Attraction!
(Female) You slide your hands,
Gently up my Thighs,
Turn me on,…
Make my Dreams Arise!
(Male) Your touch is ecstasy….
(Female) Tonight it’s You and Me….
(Male) Tie You Down,
And have my Way with You!!
Take you Savagely!!!!
The way that Lovers do…..
(Female) Don’t get me wrong now,
Tonight is Just a Night!
I just want a Lay,
And Everything will be Alright…..
(Male)
Your touch is ecstasy…..
Your touch is ecstasy!
Your touch is,
Your touch is,
Your touch is ECSTASY!!!!!
Author notes
here's a link if you want to here how i think the song should sound only with a voice that isnt so computer enhansed.... www.myspace.com/mow89
A contest entry
- "Let's Get It On" by Loversdance.
400 points, ended November 18, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sexy yet subtle
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Great write! I loved the song (who sang it? A computer?) Thanks so much for entering my contest!
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wow
i love it mow its a realy great write -
I like it though I don't like the line "Don't get me wrong/ I just want a lay" felt it doesn't bring the poem together coz if her tough were ecstasy she'd be more passionate.
Other than that, good job. Keep on writing,
Nooni
i also don't think the background matches the lyric too.. try a black solid background.. just a suggestion.
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yes the poem was about passion.... and yet it wasn't I tried to create a one time thing, that even though it was only one time it'd be rememberable. it was actually a work I had done with a friend, for a song (more to get him laughing and cheer him up because he was kinda down)if you knew my friend and how he is.... this was very hillarious for him, you should listen to it sometime..... the end of the song where we do some adlibing is hillarious!!
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