i look through the window and see in the skies
the beautiful blueness of your beautiful eyes
i look at the bark of a tree and the brown i see there
is the beautiful browness of your beautiful hair
i look at the ocean as the wave rips
and i see beautiful roundness to your beautiful hips
i listen to the radio and with every station choice
i hear the beautiful sharpness of your beautiful voice
i listen to the breeze and the storm in the sky
i hear the cowardice shake in my cowerdice sigh
because though you look beautiful nd sound beautiful too
i could never be brave enough to ask that question to you
A contest entry
- BEAUTY by Swan song.
450 points, ended August 23, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Very good
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It's very beautiful!!! How does she feel 'bout u?
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welcome to allpoetry
Your thoughts are beautiful. There is a sweetness to your words.
I think it's always worth the chance to ask or say what's on your mind... better than never knowing anyway.
I hope you will keep writing and sharing your words. You have much to say and a talent to express.
~Kristy
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