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HP vs17e

what can i say what they haven't said
i'm miserable in my joy
and joyful in my sorrow
because when you're happy
it's hard to be dark
and that's my only grievance

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  • Madam Cutter
    July 11, 2008
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    No ones' happy with what you did Aaron.
    I promise.


    • kiwi bird
      July 11, 2008
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      it would have been better to say no one is completely happy. you could be happy in one aspect and unhappy in another. that is more true to this poem

      • Madam Cutter
        July 11, 2008
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        You're right. I didn't explain that well enough.
        Sorry!

        • kiwi bird
          July 11, 2008
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          thats fine. se la vie...life goes on(or something like that).