People speak about things they do not know,
They make fun of religion and spiritual things.
They talk about women in relationships,
They talk about sex before marriage.
They talk about religion in schools,
They talk about freedom but they remove so many things.
We take our steps and then we'll hit,
There is no freedom among the ranks.
We had our soup but it is cold,
We had our fun but it is gone.
We see things in front of us,
But we forget those things that are behind us.
We are not free nor do we see,
The problems that are all around our lives.
Do we bother to speak to people,
Or do we just stay with what we believe?
What is the point I am trying to say?
I have no point, nor do you.
Author notes
I am Christian, I see no reason to make fun of others. I do believe that certain things are sins, however I do not make fun of people who do them - nor do I judge, for the Bible does say that we are not to judge. Too many times do people speak about things they know nothing about, and too many times do we allow them to do so, or worse off do we do the same thing as well.
A contest entry
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1400 points, ended July 24, 2008, 25 entries
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Please be up front and honest and tell me what you think.
Comments
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Perfect. You included everything that I wanted in this piece. You clearly stated your beliefs, why you believed them, and where you stand in regard to God. Thank you for the author notes and submitting this poem. Good luck.
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Thank you. =)
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