Suspended in darkness
Shadows decent
In black waters liquefied
The taint lives on
Embryonic fluids
Of murderous intentions
The portals open
Like eyes onto a demented reality
Twisted and distorted
Reveal and reach out
Feed and devour
In chains of madness suspended
Left to bleed
As every drop of blood spilled
Shall reveal within its core
The very seed of divinity
And the darkness craving it freedom...
Author notes
I allowed my thoughts to flow unrestricted
And this was the result...
option dark
A contest entry
- Tears Ran Dry, Echoes Of Sadness (( Give Me Dark, Creepy, Sad, Cutting, Suicide, Ex.)) by HereComesTheSun.
550 points, ended September 14, 2008, 50 entries
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Comments
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amazing so stunted in a way that it creeps you out and yet you want more
great write
fantastic
has a good shot at gold or silver
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This is really creepy, dark, and awesome. It's very well-written, and I got shivers by the time I finished it.
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