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Tomorrow's Sun

Today,
there are wounds.
But, I hope
mother will be
there to kiss away
any pain.

Today,
there are hardships.
Still, I dream
someone will be there
to help you
survive.

Today,
there are journeys
yet to be walked.
Yet, I wish for
someone to help
you tread.

Today,
there are tears.
But, from days on,
my babyboy will never cry.

Author notes

If I had to say I was thinking about anyone when I wrote this...I'd have to say, I was thinking of my nephew...

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  • baby boy
    July 12, 2008
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    Im still kinda new but i liked this one


  • Young Confusions
    July 11, 2008

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    I had to read this a few times before I properly got it - which is a good thing! I liked it anyway

    Good Luck