The gloomy evening silence
Carries creepy uneasiness
That descends to stop above you,
A dark gray raincloud hovering,
Only to fade into nothing,
Pushed by steady musical waves,
Loneliness is an illusion.
A contest entry
- Prewrites Contest by tears.of.silence.
1000 points, ended April 18, 407 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very well done.. as your first poem in the contest this is a good start. You've got three poems in here so the points will be divided. This poem gives you a 33. Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. kahy
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AWW!
this was filled with such deep sorrow and your metaphors are simply mindblowing!!! this was a beautiful write... so much imtense imagery here... your words painted gorgeous pictures in mind! i love this! keep penning kays!
AWESOME!
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