UNNN
The sun meets the water
The fields and rolling hills
There’s nothing the light
Doesn’t touch
Perfect time of year
There’ll be love
Lots of butterflies
The welcomed warmth
Brings us fearless days
No regrets, trying new things
Open and free
Laughter brings on friendship
We’ll roast marshmallows
For s’ mores
Ghost stories and camping
Sand too hot in our toes
Fresh cut grass in our lungs
It’s the perfect time of year
Deuxxx
The summer breeze
Blows in secrets, it knows the truths
You try to hide
It sees you freely,
It sees you openly
Raining in a fearless you
Tan lines, and photographs
Lying in a box under the bed
From the year before
The breeze blows in this time
Laughing as it whispers
Your sand filled secrets
TROIS
Summer is a waffle cone
Filled with mint chocolate chip bliss
With dreams of cooling off
When you know it'll only
make you thirsty
Summer is a day in the sand
Making castles, and running into waves
Wishes on star fish
For to never end
Peeling skin, and sandy toejam
Will never end this funnnn
A contest entry
- Humor, me! Please! by marciakay81.
300 points, ended August 5, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - AP 2008: Become Published by B Chandler.
2000 points, ended August 3, 47 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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A trio of summery prose not sure about the sandy toejam


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this is great write! i really enjoyed it, but i was looking for more humorous writes. i hope to have another contest soon...if this write applies please enter. again wonderful write!
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wow....this is just amazingly good, i loved reading it, you have a way with making people smile and writting such lovely life like poems, keep it up
Stephanie ♥

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This is great. I esspecially like the second poem, the first is perty fab too. Sute and fun.

cassie





