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Closer

Let me pull

down the shade

to your mind,

sip a little something

to help you unwind.

You came to me

for pleasure,

slip into the grooves,

of an intimate

treasure.

Walking your fingers

down my spine,

turn off the lights

while the time

goes blind.

Come a little

CLOSER

if you will

to the softest place

between

Taste

and

a

Thrill.

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  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    July 22, 2008

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    WOWWOW...I am visiting my little Sis and look what I read and see here too....



    I'm out off here too.......just as I walked out off my Twinnie...

    Damn...what a great family I have..
    XXJeannette


  • LaMerci
    July 17, 2008

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    Say That Piff

    Sassy and complete...fewer words but still deep...do da thang girl, this is one to keep. Really feeling!

    • Ephiphany
      July 17, 2008
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      Thank you so much sis

      I always appreciate your words
      I am trying the new program per request from my doctor.
      I feel better today, but it is a task in change, but I have to do it.

      Thanks again


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 14, 2008

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    sleeksexy i liked this i like the metaphors as well you know i love metaphors piffy ! it suckered me in to the whole piece


    • Ephiphany
      July 17, 2008
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      Thank you Love'
      I always appreciate your comments.
      Thanks again


  • Kim
    July 14, 2008

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    This is a very sensual write. Now I can really vibe to your artistry. Your writing is excellent. Thanks for sharing your talents. God Bless You, My Sister!

    • Ephiphany
      July 14, 2008
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      Hey Kim

      thank you so much for the wonderful comment on this piece. I truly enjoy writing with all of my Heart and Soul.

      It's a part of my Life, I wake up thinking of what to write next, I really appreciate you

      Be Blessed my sister

      -e


  • Levesta
    July 12, 2008
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    lovely as always sis


  • ladyhurricane
    July 12, 2008

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    This was a nice, very sensual, intimate piece.
    One thing about your poems, you have ones imagination on the run....


    • Ephiphany
      July 12, 2008
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      Thank you

      you know me...Pisces built on a lot of emotions


  • Xmjx
    July 12, 2008
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    Loved it anuty piff what a truely hot and passonate write amazing love Mj your nephew


    • Ephiphany
      July 12, 2008
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      Thanks nephew, been

      a while since Ive heard from you. HOw are you doing?


      -piff


  • Mykeee
    July 11, 2008

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    lol - hehehehe yeah girl. naughty with a sweet taste to go with it. I bet there's more than just one wet spo... ooops soft spot. (Damn watch that inner thought typing) Nice one lady


    • Ephiphany
      July 12, 2008
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      Hey sweetie

      thank you, and yes you are correct in saying
      I appreciate the comment, I've missed you here.


  • King1on1
    July 11, 2008

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    this was tight! i liked this piecec the flow was so tight i really liked thanks for reading my poem to


    • Ephiphany
      July 11, 2008
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      You are welcome.

      I look forward to reading more of your work
      Keep writing and thanks for the lovely comment.

      -ephiphany


  • ennovy silver member
    July 11, 2008

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    The rhyme is awesome and so well balanced it makes the words flow smooth, softly off the tongue of the readers......excellent poem of passion....a tiny bit naughty too....g'momma


    • Ephiphany
      July 11, 2008
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      thank you g'momma my Alter Ego came out on this one


  • MzDimeDivia
    July 11, 2008

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    loved it

    i loved it just like all the others im back and i love this piece can you read my poem called killing me thank you so very much good luck and keep written and i will keep written amazing comments about your poetry!~!@!~!~`1


    • Ephiphany
      July 11, 2008
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      Hi

      thank you so much for the comment, and yes I would love to read your poem.

      Thanks again
      ephiphany


  • HaleyMary
    July 11, 2008

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    Beautiful, passionate write, Sis. I liked the part of time going blind. It seemed metaphorical, like how people lose track of time when with someone they like. Thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


  • darell
    July 11, 2008

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    Sensualiscious!

    what a nice image of intimacy you've
    painted with your passionate brush of love.
    I was thrilled chilled and brought under
    your charming will. I love it and you baby.
    Always,darell

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