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work day blues

women at work
gossip over lunchtime
sharing a smile
but mute
i look on

the endless fridays
and almost weekends
leave me drained
and pumped
simultaneously

wishing for one more smoke
five extra minutes
and maybe
a go home early

none of this will happen though

the endless stream of people
deposits and withdrawls
money floating
through fingers
that do not have any

work day blues
fading me away
until
saturday

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gave it what was on my mind...

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  • Swan song gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    This was a poem to enjoy it is honest everyday and real life and many times thos just whats on your mind poems are very good like this one