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Mother earth is dying

The bruise that claims
This earth is war
How can you sit
Back and ignore?
All the hatred that
        We bore?
I'd have thought life
      Meant more
Than the obvious avarice
        Galore?
But it seems we will
      Meet End,
Knees to the ground
      Neck bend
Hopeless helpless with
  None to defend.
Toward the Echoside
    We send
The loveless laughless
  Corporate Trend

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Do you ignore the state our Mother Earth is in?

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  • pimp daddy satin
    July 23, 2008
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  • Stoneface Gremlin
    July 14, 2008

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    Intense

    This is a thinking persons poem. It is intelligently sassy. The rythm of the poem adds to its sense of pain and outrage. It is true that the corporate mind-set is money grubbing idiots that doesn't realize that they will be stuck on the same lifeless rock as the rest of us if things doesn't change.


  • Rogue-Poet
    July 11, 2008
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    wow

    This is short and intense...i like it very much.