swirling colors surround
bright blues and yellows
noise fills my deaf ears
all I hear is the roar
wet grass against my skin
goose bumps crawl
shivers run through my body
alone in chaos
surrounded by movement,
but still
surrounded in color,
but black and white
lonely in a world of
color
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i really love the nice "alone in chaos"
i wish i could write like this.
amazing job jack.
this is one of my favorite poems ever. -
i can relate, good imagery and metaphors i love your style of writing. keep me posted.
sincerely,
♥LostLoverPoet♥
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first and last stanzas are life. good write.
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i feel that way 2 sometimes...
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thanks for understanding
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