My Stabilizing Stain
Current mood: touched
Category: Writing and Poetry
It's just so hard to leave...
once again in the wind,
blown away from what had gave My Heart a beat.....
...My Mind's a victim in defeat,....
to never allow such love again.
Caught up in outer space, just me and you,
Remaining such true lovers and friends.....
This couldn't really be the end....
our souls connect, always direct with one another,
with each silent message we send.....
We're each other's sources to amend,....
Igniting each other's spark to bring some light to what was dark,
in every single passing moment we spend......
I will be away....
But in your Heart I will remain....
I'll take you any place I go... You'll always know,...
That you're My Stabilizing Stain........
You are the piece missing from my brain.....
the one I strain to function right, without....
So when I'm gone I'll be going insane.....
You are the absence that left me in this drought.....
A contest entry
- LOVE LOST - Prewrites ok by Regretlove.
450 points, ended July 31, 2008, 22 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Breakups by slippingofftheedge.
300 points, ended August 22, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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words are good
i think it would flow a little better if the meter matched more -
I think you mean "We're each other's sources to amend" This was such an amazing poem. So creative, and heartfelt. Good Luck in the contest.
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Perfect
Wow.. you left me speechless. Exactly what I wanted.
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