Feet were his
Ecstacy
Toes dipped
In
Sensual chocolate
Heaven sent
Author notes
Picture found here: http://deaubrey.deviantart.com/art/chocolate-toes-46132241
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A contest entry
- Friday the Eleventh-Word Prompt by Gypsie Ink.
300 points, ended July 14, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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There's a nice simplicity in this acrostic. The only thing I would say to change is make it a bit more vivid, so you can use a different word than "in" for the I of fetish.
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Toes AND chocolate!!!!! YEA!!!
Cute acrostic.
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lol. not the greatest picture though.
an attempt at acrostics
nice to see you and thanks for stopping by
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Yummy!
Got to love that chocolate! Thank you for your entry and best of luck. -
@Cheryl's comment!
Oooooooo what a lovely, sensual acrostic
My mind is flying all over the place! And yes you did it in 11 words! Excellent
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Thank you for stopping by Gaylene. if you go and read Cannonsfire & Imahealer's entries too, you will see how we entertained ourselves last night. lol
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How on earth did you do this poem in 11 words, but you did and its brilliant
Julie
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HAHA!!
Very nice. I especially like the fine anecdotes you got in response... lol. The mark of a truly...moving... poem... great job and good luck in the contest! -
Maybe she should judge on the comments that make her laugh the hardest!
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lol I don't care anymore about the contest, this is just good fun lololol
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The sensual chocolate you find in the adult stores is so great! I don't waste a drop on anyone. I drink it myself! hehe Now those are some toes I could suck! (Hope there's no fungus on the nails! OMG, this is the most fun I've ever had in an anonymous (LOL) contest!
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Oh and imagine if the toe was bigger than his other appendage hahahaha too funny
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I once as a teen sent a poor guy to a mental hospital as his was so small, I couldn't find it, and had to ask him where it was! OMG!
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What??? His toe or the other thingy!!!!! hahaha...did they tell him there that if he thought it wasn't there then it wasn't at all.
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The other thingy! He eventually got married and has never produced a child. I imagine every time he inserts it, It falls out!
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A bit like a chinese bead???
Oh his poor wife, I wonder if she tried it before she bought it!
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I doubt it! I knew her from high school and she was an ice queen. They adopted two children.
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So they let him out of the asylum...I wonder if he shrivels when she looks at him?
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I swear, it was so small (erect) he needed a penile implant. Ahhhhhhhh! MAybe he got one! and that's why they're still married!
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Well I guess he would never make a willy model for the battery operated ones!!!!
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Do they really use models when they craft the battery operated ones? I have a few clients who might qualify for the larger ones! (I peek under the drape sometimes!) HAve to run. This has been fun, but I need a shower so now I'm done. LOve you both!
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It has been the ultimate pleasure
Have a wonderful day and I hope you dont get too cold in the shower!
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lol Well they couldn't design them from memory could they lolol Yep had a ball hun, catch you on the next fetish lol
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or maybe he DOES use his other apendages! IT is not the only tool in the arsenal
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Oh for a minute I thought we were back to ice cream!!! lolol
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She should have gone for the richer option of pearls lol natural substance always works better!!!!
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I was so excited I forgot the bunnies LOLOLOL
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That damn chocolate sauce is getting passed around a lot tonight!!! Must put it on the grocery list
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I have plenty... a huge bottle in the pantry, you can just go search if you feel the urge!
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Looks like you used it all on those toes up there lol
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