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Always and Forever

Always and Forever,

you will stay in My Heart.

I'll always see us there together,

I always had from the start.



My Heart and Soul cause stormy weather,

when they're not seasons apart.

So therefore My Heart's left where I met her,

and I have traveled afar.



Now looking back I search the World,

for where My Star seems to shine.

Not searching for diamonds or pearls,

I just want that girl to be mine.



My tingled spine gives off the signs,

I need to feed My Heart's furry.

Heart steadily pounds as I announce,

My Love so strongly and purely.

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    August 27, 2008

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    This is a good poem, love the read. Still miffed to those caps tho, they really aren't needed mid sentence. Thanks for entering and good luck


  • SingPraiz4Hym
    July 27, 2008
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    Fun poem although I'm not real sure how it fits into firsts here. You had nice little turns and thoughts in this that kept me attentive too. Thanks for entering. Good luck.


  • crazymomma
    July 26, 2008

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    I wish this had gone on to say if she became yours or not. I loved the story and the sweetness of the words. Thanks for entering and good luck