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Come And GO

  Dark room full of people..
Still she is alone..
She is so curious..
When this is all over, who will really be there?
Who dares to speak the truth?
She imagines going through life on her own..
Keeping her balance, without holding on to you..
Things come and go
And don't inflict any pain..
She must be cautious of everything..
Never will she let her guard down again..
She says it hurts to much..
Her anger is her shield..
Is there anything truly permanent?
Searching for something that will last forever..
Maybe that doesn't exist..
She has watched chances fade for to long..
No one knows where she is heading..
Without destination, she continues on her journey.. 

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  • Fading.Heart
    August 24, 2008
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    Wow this is so powerful =] Its amazing a great write x


  • Ashbert
    July 29, 2008

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    Thtas exactly what you have to do with life. Everything imaginable is going to be thrown at you, and all you can do is continue on your journey. I thought you captured that really well, and the uncertainty that we all face at one time or another. great write


  • PsychoAnalysis
    July 28, 2008

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    This was really good as well. I liked the way it flowed, it seemed very natural. Amazing job, keep writing!
    ~W.W~


  • AlanaNicole
    July 22, 2008
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    I definitely liked this one.