If I were to take the stars
from their place in the heavens,
they would certainly lose their glow
for nothing will ever compare
to the love shining through your eyes
You're the one whom I think of before sleeping;
the first person in my mind in the morning
With just one look I knew you were the one;
the one I would love forever plus one day...
Your lips; your touch
stirs my passion...
cascading
free falling
whirling
into soft pools
of warm, glowing light
And were my life to end tomorrow,
I would know nothing but bliss and peace
for
I have seen heaven through the love we've shared...
A contest entry
- Favorites of Silent Hawk by PureCountry.
875 points, ended August 6, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Another Tug of the Heart,
I would melt at the thought if someone vocalized this to me. Whew!!
Well Written, with great natural flow, thanks for entering.
Niaish
Silent Hawk
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Excellent
What a great creation for the prompt. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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3 claps = 9 points
Lionslove lair
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Beautiful Thoughts
How lucky your lover on this fair night
As he rests in ease with you by his side
Falling asleep knowing that all is right
Life with you is a comfortable ride
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Oh Honey,
This is perfectly amazing! The love sure can be felt with your words! *sigh* What a great job!
Best of luck in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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Precious~
Oh My this is a Beauty of a piece You have versed
Gosh the Love can be felt darling
Excellent!! Keep bringing on the Love
Wahooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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WOW!!! YOUR HEART SHINES WITHIN!!!
In every word your heart shines with love and happiness.'s
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Excellent
And were my life to end tomorrow,
I would know nothing but bliss and peace
for
I have seen heaven through the love we've shared...
Great ending for a heartfilled verse
Beautiful
Rick
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Wow this is sure heartfelt for that hubby of yours. Your two's love is the way it's suppose to be. Lovely write and good luck in the contest.
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Awww this is simply very beautiful,
kinda warms the heart.
I love being in love,
best feeling ever.
This is such a soft and tender piece.
Very enjoyable.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Beautiful Love, C
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well done my Dear Sis as my tears flow for the love luminates for your being onto your words from your heart and knowing the passion of your soul. your gent is a very very lucky man. much love and many blessings always xxxx
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Awww! This is just beautiful!!! A warm and loving piece of sincerity through love's eyes. Very well penned!!!
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Such an outpouring of love for another
So beautiful and heartfelt this is, Sis!
Lynda
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