Time with blood stained wings
Let me escape, I'm begging!
I might believe that living.....
To be or not to be.
The question is:
What do you want from me?
The only silence is death.
I'm just the steak of a bet
And life will loose me.
Things are not as they should.
I can't see their place in life
I can't find my place between them
I'm caught between changes.
Please, abort me.
My fall will be soft as the morning dew
Don't try to save me, please.
Because no matter how high I fly
The pain is always with me.
I've played the game of life
And lost.Here is too warm
I'm leaving in the world with no dreams
From the world of ones who shatter hopes
One day you'll understand what I had to say
One day I'll leave you my feelings .
But all I can leave you is pain
I can't see how I could live,please.
The disappointments are bigger than life
And suicide is like a painkiller
My own punishments, my own sins
Coma of fieelings
A contest entry
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Comments
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There are poems that are very short and say very much. Then there are those poems that are long and say very little. I felt that yours was the latter - too much repetition of the same idea.
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i like the poem .. a lot..
it shows the deep thoughts.
good work!
-Arooj-
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