Those are heart burns
Like droplets as they cling to me
Not long before I had wept for thee
But you in your sweetened tongue told
Left my folds as whimpered cries crush me cold.
I faced this freedom warmth
And your kiss melted in cozy sprays
Down the drain my sobs unheeded stayed.
Give this lover back I said and wantonly craved.
In tear drops I walk
Drying my body and my soul
It is your caress touch that takes the toll.
Rain drops, rain drops I yearn for love,
Bring him home; I will love you more.
A contest entry
- JUST WRITE YOUR FEELINGS... by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended July 24, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Come on cry for her love to come back?
Comments
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o there is so much emotion in this poem. so romantic yet I feel such a yearning and a sadness, a weeping. Very very well done and so expressive. Love, truetome.
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*In tear drops I walk* I love that line. Excellent poem, written beautifully. Best of luck in the contest.
Linda
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