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Bonded Souls

Pages turn yet the story
I've heard before..
Read aloud or within my mind..
I see this image of what you think
you hide behind

 

 

Vivid pictures formed from your words
dance inside my brain
Reoccurring tale

only the scene begins to change

 

Tears once cried, now dried in

sands of time, sing of what once was

a thoughtful life, cradled without knowledge

in coagulated love because,of your unwillingness

to survive.. 

 

Memories too painful to release

into the abyss of our soul

Haunting your dreams

defeating your will

 

Reflections of ourselves

deep inside the pool of life

I gaze to find humanity you thought

you lost through time..

Light will shine and I will say that, I was

with you every step of the way

 

Together we journey away from our fears

 forgetting the demons

That haunt our present

creating memories free from fear.

 

 

As we walk in our lives we quietly look

upon each other and know that it's how

well I see your soul and you see mine

That creates this bond that we share

for all time..

Author notes

3. "I know your soul"

Picture credit: My_soul____by_mmebuterfly

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  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry! My co-judge was responsible in this contest for critical critiques, while I myself will be commenting on the overall thought and feel of the write. I agree with what has been said, that the overall thought behind this poem is enjoyable, albeit somewhat lacking in originality.

    I found this write to hold very tender feelings, a sense of fragility in the souls of the two writers, and still a frail fear in opening oneself to love. Yet a willingness to do so.. due to the overwhelming feeling of understanding another's soul and trusting in them enough to move through a journey with them. Whether that be the journey of love or simply life itself. That I found inspiring, hopeful and very uplifting.

    This write left me feelings of tenderness and joy. I enjoyed it very much, and thank you for entering it!


  • luna-midnight silver member
    July 16, 2008

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    awww this is such a beautiful collab daddy glad to see you entered, me and lory did this one too *hugs*
    good luck and take care
    stephanie ♥


    • buffsab99
      July 16, 2008

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      Thank you

      Thank you dear daughter, I will make sure to read you and your bf's collab


      • luna-midnight silver member
        July 16, 2008
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        awww thats nice, hehe, but i dont know, he made it nice, i dont do that good >.>

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    I do to also think that you both did a great job goodluck to you both in the contest best wishes and much love


  • Lil-Bit Crazy
    July 11, 2008

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    wow you two did awesome.... love it much..... great job.... thank you for sharing this and good luck in contest.......!


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    Amazing

    Very deep, beautiful and touching. You both have done an excellent job on this. A wonderful read. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.


    • buffsab99
      July 11, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you so much. I credit my partner Angelflower for much of the beautiful work on this one


  • Margaret Denham gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    To truly know someone so well that you know their soul is the indication of a special connection and you showed that so well within your words. A beautiful collaboration.

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Margaret


    • buffsab99
      July 11, 2008
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      Thank you

      To have a connection that strong is a wonderful thing. Thank you so much for your kind words

  • carole21
    July 11, 2008

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    very nice

    a very nice seductive write on love . . liked "Reflections of ourselves deep inside the pool of life" and "it's how well I see your soul and you see mine" . . good luck in the contest


    • buffsab99
      July 11, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you, it was fun to finally write something with someone as talented as Angelflower. Her work amazes me.

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