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(A KISS).... poem by Alex Chandler

A kiss is amazing in what it conveys,
It tells of how she/he loves you,
And of how yall'd spent yalls' days.
It can be followed up with a warming hug,
A feeling that creates the little tug,
That little tug inside you chest,
That feeling uncompariable,
That feeling
Oh! of best.
The kiss of my love how much it means to me,
To know that you are loved and that,
Hey!!,
She's content with me.
I can't tell you bout your kiss,
And why would I tell of mine,
Believe me when you find that someone,
All these words become benign.
Kissing,
What a way to tell her of her wonder,
To tell of her beauty and grace,,,
To show her of how amazing she really is,
And to convey overall how the day went.
A kiss is amazing,
A kiss is unreal,
A kiss is unimaginable,
And especially in the way that it makes you feel.
A kiss is so fun,
A kiss is unmistakable,
A kiss is so warming,
But not in the way as the sun.
A kiss is a love seen,
Found only between those two,
A kiss is too meaningful,
So powerful,
For it reveals something significantly true.
Kissing is a privelege,
Only given by your lover,
Don't ever take it lightly,
For if you don't mean it,
It'll kill you and oh so mightily.

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  • Wild and On Fire
    September 13, 2008
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    I thought it was alright...

    I loved the way that it conveys everything that a kiss creates in you and while it happens.


  • HeartofDiamonds
    July 11, 2008
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    What do you mean about the last two lines?? I don't get it...