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This darkness you see

What you see is not
Always what you get

In this chair
One person may sit

But if you gave time
To look deep inside

You would see this soft not
So dark person that hides

My mask you see is one 
I show to protect all thats left in me

Shattering my heart and bruising my soul
Is what they set out to achieve

I found some light in my darkness
And he's piecing my heart back together

Mending my soul to heal
And helping me come out of this storm better

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Credit Aritst: Chaos Queen by Morbidia Morthel
http://morbidiamorthel.deviantart.com/art/Chaos-Queen-77365220

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  • RawrSmileBabyPlz
    July 23, 2008

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    great

    i liked this alot its very well written with emotion good job. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
    ..<3..
    Shelly


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 15, 2008

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    I see the light as well

    I have found this piece so true and how we often put on a different dress for people than the person residing within . We are all guilty there .Yet often the hard surface is not so hard if one finds someone to talk to and be with that are loving and kind to the core .I see your light honey and always have .Love Patty

  • Topnotchsy
    July 13, 2008

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    Nice write. I think many can relate to hiding behind a person we create (and other's know us as) to protect the real "us" that's inside. Congrats on the honorable mention.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 12, 2008

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    OH I like your take on this! That her darkness and her demeanor is just a front for a soft spirit inside! A lovely piece that offers hope!! Thank you!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 11, 2008

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    Beautifully put. The hope offered here is truely inspiring. A wonderful write, good luck


  • buffsab99
    July 11, 2008
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    Awesome

    Awesome write my SL. You are doing so well


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    July 11, 2008

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    I like this alot. It shows how you are looking in on yourself and offers hope. You have been through alot and are doing well. You are an inspiration.

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