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You Say

You say you love me,
But really,
Do you even want me?

You say you miss me,
But seriously,
Do you even care?

You say you know me,
But honestly,
You don't even know me at all, do you?

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Just a poem I wrote in about 10 mins.

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  • Peccavi
    April 6

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    Subarashii!

    I'm sorry you're feeling that way, we all can feel unloved and unwanted at some point in our lives.

    It's great you have written a poem about it.... I wish I knew who this person was... Alwell like I always say you can't be as lonley or screwed up as Rob Thomas.

    Because it's okay to be a little fucked up sometimes, because everyone in their own uneqe way is a little fucked up.

    There is no such thing as normal because everyone is different and we can never define normal or even contenplate what normal is... But aslong as your yourself and you're happy... I couldn't care less if you were fucked up in anysort of way.

    Because I always will love you with a passion.... Until 2 hearts are content.

    Thank you for rating my badly written song and buying me a gift from Melbourne.

    Love you to death xoxo Serebear.... Keep on smiling it's the worlds cure to depression!


  • EphemeralStyle
    July 12, 2008

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    I have to say, my jaw dropped to the floor when I saw you'd written a new poem O.o And it's weird knowing the background story to it ^^" I like it tho

    Gah, I've totally had writer's block lately, and forcing the words out doesn't seem to help. It's weird, at school I have no time to write but heaps of inspiration, and on the holls I have time but no inspiration -_- Gah!

    I really hope things work out for you two.

    Eph


  • travellingsoldier
    July 11, 2008

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    I like it

    It sounds like something i would write with the stuff i am going through right now. lol. If you need to chat just let me know, okay??