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My Stranger

Lets be honest
You don't see me
You look at me with those vacant eyes
and nod your head accordingly

morning
      after morning
            after morning
                  after morning

Lets be honest
You don't know me
Although you have unrestricted
access to my heart

day
    after day
         after day
             after day

Lets be honest
You don't understand me
though I've bared your children
and lay motionless in bed by your side

night
     after night
          after night
              after night

Lets be honest
You'll never truly love me
For when I look in the mirror
and see you...
I honestly see a stranger.

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  • St. Poet
    July 15, 2008
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    Very good poem, I love the style. Keep up the good work.