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Breaking Away from Chains. . .

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Chained to a life of
Misery, Depression and Melancoly
The woman decided...
I need not cry tears
But break away from these chains...
I want to soar high...
Like the eagle flies!
So she made this vow...
God, above listen to my plea.
I need you to set me free!
If you help me...
I'll never leave your side
And you'll always be my best friend!
So till you answer...
Here's my prayer...
God above,
Creator of all beauty and life...
Grant me one wish
I want to live like a Princess
Not with jewels and treasures...
But in a fairy tale of happiness!
Please Oh God...
Set me free of these past chains!

dragonheart1

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http://nicolas-henri.deviantart.com/art/Perish-75874553
This may not me what you want..but its a plea in a prayer to be happy again like a Princess!

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Comments

  • I can now see what you are talking about in this poem.. everyone interprets the pic differently. for me this hits close to home for many reasons.. excellent take on the prompt.

    good luck

    kat


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 11
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    I really like the emotion in this poem and the imagery as well.. Though for some reason it doesn't seem to fit the prompt picture.. That could just be me but I guess I just don't see what you do in the picture.. This would have been a really great take on a picture with actual chains in it.. But again that could just be me.. Lol.. Best of luck..


    Angel