This is me,
Take me how I am.
I give you all of me,
But I warn you now,
You may be disappointed.
I will not change for you,
Nor will I edit myself
for anyone else.
I am honest,
I am me..
But,
I am loneliness.
Author notes
Its how im feeling at the moment..
A contest entry
- LONELINESS by Swan song.
450 points, ended July 13, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great write hon keep on penning!
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This is beautiful baby girl, I loved it, so sad but true I'm always here for you baby xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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nice touch at the end
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Thank you, my Dear. xx
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I love the honesty of this write! Stand by this creed and you will go far!!!
Love~
Az
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