Standing on the face of the clock...
The two contempate their vows.
and
The unknown risks
Lying ahead of them
Silenlty they stare at each other
But decide...
It was worth the risk
So they say..
Lets gamble on marriage
for
Being together is better than remaining alone.
dragonheart1
Author notes
credit for pic unknown
A contest entry
- Fantasy...options/whatever you please by Demington.
1350 points, ended August 3, 10 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This poem is quite good, but it lacks the polish of proofreading (Silenltyl?) And your use of the periods of ellipsis was a little distracting.
All in all I liked this poem and, despite it's regrettable lack of an obvious fantasy theme, I cannot deny the feeling captured from the image.
Well done poet,
Blessings
C
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oops, forgot these,
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Good write, good luck in the contest, yessa!
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You have a day or so to finish this. If you have no interest in doing so, or just do not have the time, let me know.
Peace -
Let me know when you finish this. I'm eager to see what happens when this gets its last bit of polish.
Blessings,
C
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