How else, shall we be blessed or be assumed
as having the eternal life, like death
whose own reversal claims are whether groomed
for after-life consumes it one long breath,
believing it were true, that to discard
the hope that living was, a death's prelude
forever this judgemental disregard,
though proven fact delights, I do conclude.
Horizons' are not reached, but there they are
as far the eye can see, then death shall so
delivers it unanswered, then the star,
explains the immortality I know.
If lost for words, then death for me somehow
shall invite you to silence this avow.
Author notes
-noun.
1. The quality or condition of being immortal.
2. Endless life or existence.
3. Enduring fame.
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- Immortality... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
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THERE IS A TOUCH OF HIS FLOW AND HIS SUBJECT HERE WHILE YOU DESCRIBED HIS IMMORTALITY WELL DONE....THANKS..
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this is a lovely sonnet dear,
i love it alot, it really does speak to me,
your words are always full of intelligence and such,
all my love,
kitty xxx
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