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Caress

Sillohette strip-tease,
Standing afar,
Keeping one eye on me,
Blanket's ajar,

I invite the heat,
To indulge in passion,
I make her weak,
This lust everlasting,

Legs and thys,
My caress attends,
My tongue explores,
My body descends,

Pulling my hair,
Screaming my name,
Moving uncontrolably,
Her body's aflame,

Enter, I, to euphoria,
Release does she the oohh,
We lay there stroking and kissing,
"I love you, I love you, I love YOU!"

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True Love-Making Can Be Erotic...mmmmm...

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  • Li snuffles
    July 12, 2008
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    oohh, I love you, I love you, I love YOU!

    .....xx


  • Tylers Baby
    July 11, 2008
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    i like this its very sexy and yet the ending speaks of love great job keep up the good work


  • righteousme
    July 11, 2008
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    Hmmmmm... erotic and HOT!!! ouch i think you burned me... you go boy!!! sexy and steamy!!!


  • Cannonsfire
    July 11, 2008

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    Wow I mean can you shut the door Nice job but 'thys' think you mean 'thighs' or maybe not Love, C