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Swinging and. . .

Missing image
Dressed in black..
Swinging above the sea...
The woman is sad and depressed
Thinking...
Why should I live?
I can trust no one...
Not even myself...

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 12

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    Thats me on the swing thanks so much for sharing and definately more then I relate to this piece.
    Keep it up

    Best wishes

    Tory


  • KayJay46 gold member
    July 11
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    Nice interpretation... dark and definitely full of angst... Well done and best of luck...
    Ken


  • AngelWithDarkWings gold member
    July 11

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    this is so sad.. I'm sure that there are many who can relate to this.. a place where I'm sure that many have been at some point in their lives. even I have been there.

    excellent take on the prompt

    good luck

    kat