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Hell Escaper

Hell on earth once welcomed me
With widely open arms and legs

Like a dream for myriads of perverts and other kinds of scum
Sludge covering the senses of the visitors with hallucinations
Love was not needed in such a place; lust was carefree and raw
Take it or leave it, hearts were replaced there with machines
The rogue sat there, yet the awkward principles screwed him
Twisting his deep complexes to an irreversible, decisive point
Emptiness was found around, but was it his or their emptiness?
The bubble of isolation didn't have the answers for their grief
But an excuse for their scorn towards life by itself: Sad awe
To the feelings not given, not awarded, never considered worthy
Their own hive of senseless imagination, disregarded by society
A community of eternal maidens and royal warriors never fighting
Hell deserved an extension of worthless people on Gaea's terrain
The extremes were starving to fulfillment or vacuum the same way

And there I was, staring at the parties
Here and there, fake love, true love
Everything was exchanged for just a word
Gentleness, caring touches and then the bed
A place where dreams become ideals, not truths
The same place destroying the same targets
One after another, corruption is spread
And like punks, they all gathered rage
Against an unfair reason for whining
Discharging everything in a leash of pain
A place unbearable for humankind itself
But beasts, human beasts inhabited there

I said good bye to that hell on earth
I left with a smile
And my middle fingers up

Author notes

2 days ago, the exact date of my birthday, I left a place like this, where I thought I had friends and love but everything ended in betrayal and pain. I don't know if I regret the decision I made yet, everything I know is that the place itself was painful, and I'm surprised I could bear three months there.

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  • Harmonious Jade
    July 12, 2008
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    Dark Clouds

    Then good riddance I say, fuck all of those that do not appreciate what you have to offer! Fake smiles and caring will brought back upon all of them a thousand fold...thank you Karma. There are many place on earth that are not hell...and you will find one of these one day...i am optimistic today


  • Domz101
    July 11, 2008

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    Good for you Kyo-N, really you did good, nice write man truly expressed those banged-up thoughts here man, good luck man...Domz !ONE!