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[ My hear beats a hundred times faster ]

My heart beats a hundred times faster
At just the sight of you.
My knees buckle just when you brush
Your fingers across my cheek.
And when you kiss me...
I lose all control,
My fingers thread through your hair,
As if they have a mind of their own.
My body presses its self closer,
But never getting close enough.

Hearing your voice calling my name,
Whoever was talking to me
Is forgotten.

When you look at me,
Nothing else exists.

Your smile,
Makes my heart melt.

And when you tell me
Your ridiculous plans for life,
I smile and promise to be by your side
No matter what.
Knowing, as i say it, that every word is true.

I walk into your arms,
And they encircle my waist,
I know you never want to let go.

THIS is true love.

A contest entry

I hope this is what you were looking for. It reminds me of my bf and me. If I dont win this contest im ok with that i loved writting this poem!!

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  • J Kard
    July 12, 2008

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    amazing

    it made me want to fall in love lol. A wonderful illustration of that what love should be. makes me think of that special someone...lol


    • xrain dancerx
      July 12, 2008
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      i still cant believe her name was taylor. o was i suppose to say that?? well if im not let me know ill take it of later. well anyways im glad it made u want to fall in love. i was going for that. lolz
      *HUGS* TAY.

      • J Kard
        July 12, 2008
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        yeah its ok. under Turtle Dove, it says its about Taylor Nelson lol


  • Darc Soul 69
    July 11, 2008

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    your right all that you have stated above is true love and i love how your poem brings that out. I do think that you have a great talent and i can't wait to read more of your poems. Thanks for sharing and good luck to you in the contest


    • xrain dancerx
      July 11, 2008
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      thank u black panther. just let me know when u post new poems. i love ur stuff.
      *HUGS* TAY.


  • Spiritual Soul
    July 11, 2008
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    Aww this is precious, I love it. You sound like you are in love and it shows so well in this poem. I am so glad you liked writing this poem, it was great and written very well, with just the write emotion. Thanks for your entry!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~

    • xrain dancerx
      July 11, 2008
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      thank u. i really am in love with him. -dreamy eyes-. lolz.
      *HUGS* TAY.


  • NoFaith.And.NoHeart
    July 11, 2008
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    Wow nice poem its really pretty and sweet keep writing
    MORE!
    Missy

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