Forgivable Love
You say you love me,
But do you love me enough to forgive me
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For all those lies I told,
Over and over again.
Collecting in your mind,
Building much hate.
Oh how did you bare it all,
Those horrible things I told.
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You say you love me,
But do you love me enough to say “Yes I forgive you”
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I told you I was sorry,
I know how much pain I made you experience.
I told you I shouldn’t have,
But that’s just not enough.
So, in poem, here’s what I’m trying to tell you,
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Patrick, I’m sorry.
A contest entry
- JUST WRITE YOUR FEELINGS... by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended July 24, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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aww I love you and Yes I forgive you
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Oo, this was an affectionate and wonderful poem. I loved how you've worded this and the way it was set up. Brilliant write
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like it hate it love it wanna kill it idc jus w/e ya think
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