Standing alone...
Looking at the hpynotizing rain
Strike her window...
With rhymnatic sounds of
Pitter pat...
The silhouetted woman holds a towel
Close to her naked bosom
And stares....
Into the night.
Sadly hoping...
And Wishing...
That she was not alone...
dragonheart1
Author notes
Im omne word over the 4O word limit but cant shorten this poems message...
A contest entry
- JUST WRITE YOUR FEELINGS... by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended July 24, 21 entries
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,Sad, Love, Pain, Lost Hope
Comments
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I see why she is so sad.. been there know this feeling all to well. but maybe someday she will find what she is missing. You have some typos though.
2nd line hpynotising = hypnotizing
6th line silohuetted = silhouetted
11th line Wising = Wishing
good luck in the contest
kat
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cool.
cool poem.
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