It was very dark
Through the night
So dark
Was the night
All through the world
Sad cries go out
Sad cries go out
Through the halls
Of power
They are deaf
They are deaf
Cannot hear the cries of the world
All I hear
Is the cries
The cries
All I hear
Is the hate
The hate
One more day
One more night
Storm front
Moving in
Moving in
Storm front
A contest entry
- JUST WRITE YOUR FEELINGS... by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended July 24, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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certainly a feeling poem... seems like fear is "moving in" ~ you captured feeling very well. Prettypoetry
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amazing...
this is really beautiful.. though kinda painful... i love these words. ~nico~
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