I want to
be you.
Feel the pitter-patter of
wings upon my
back.
Wind echoing through my
colors reaching out for
fairytales loving more then
once.
Taste the sweet
nectar of life
forgetting trivial matters.
Worried for nothing but
next spring new flowers
fresh air.
Bitter pollen on my face
instead of...
tears.
Perhaps if I close my
eyes I will see no pain.
And your world will
envelope me with sweet
ecstasy kisses.
Beautiful
wishful
thinking.
I want to
be you.
Author notes
PICTURE CREDIT: Delicate Thoughts by ~yana182 at Deviantart.com
Ooooooo...shiny picture. ♥
Hmm....butterflies.
A contest entry
- ♥ Delicate Thoughts Contest ♥ by OnceUponAMind.
1600 points, ended July 22, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment if you wish.
Comments
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Very pretty layout, and a great take on the picture. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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romance touches in those places where one least expects it!
Well done my friend!
Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
Bill
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Awww, this is just beautiful! How sweet it would be to be a butterfly
Great thoughts here, thank you for entering this lovely piece into my contest!
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Thankies!
It took forever to write! 
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what an interesting format...i love it! and the poem is touching, babe. especially
Bitter pollen on my face
instead of...
tears.
Perhaps if I close my
eyes I will see no pain.
And your world will
envelope me with sweet
ecstasy kisses.
that takes the cake.
great write!
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Spankies I worked hard on it .
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Hey i really enjoyed reading this. Good luck with the contest!
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Thanks
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^^
like it.
hope you win!
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Spankles Anna Doll
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ooo! i loooooove ur pic too!! hahaha and i loove you
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Lol thankies lurve you too
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