Let love rain down
upon me
I need not be sheltered
with cloth
For compassion's love
covers my tender heart
Soaked in my delighted joy
I dance with strength
bathed in unbridled bliss
A contest entry
- YAY!!! ---->QUICKIE!!! by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended July 11, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful
This is just beautiful Lisa. I love the pic and the poem is so perfect. Congradulations on the bronze.
Oh I just love your new page my dear sweet sister. I have missed you and I hope all is well. You are an excellent poetess and I'm glad I can call you my AP sister and friend.
Much Love Always
Kelle Marie
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Congrats on the Bronze ... another enticing entry! weeeeeee!
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Congrats on the Bronze, baby!!!
Well done, nice take on the prompt!
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awww so many thanks for the bronze!
This was a very cool prompt my dear one!
Hugsssss
~Lisa~
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I liked this reminded me of the song Umbrella somewhat great take on the prompt, good luck
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A very well penned piece to go along with the prompt. Love that last line. Beauty found in love's hope. Nicely done. Thank you for your entry!
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Beautiful write rich with imagery and emotion...well done sissy...
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Nice imagery and emotion ... but watch your title ... spell check doesn't like titles.
'bathed in unbridled bliss' yes ... quite nice.
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Sigh.. oh my.. that is just so beautiful!!
Truely a delight to read hun!
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Good luck sissy
P.S hope you are going well ....
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