Immortality is easy.
Free your emotion,
pour it on a parchment.
Spill the ink,
let the words sing.
"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this and this gives life to thee."
Author notes
Anyone can be immortal through poems.
Shakespears thought me this.
A contest entry
- Immortality... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended July 23, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think as i'm trying to improve my english
Comments
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yes nicely caught the immagery to find the truth of the subject..well done...Thank you so much for entering my contest..my friend...
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OMG that's like my second favourite shakespere quote ^^
(favs the serpent one... can't remember how it goes
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Love the flow and the choice of your words here ^^
I wish you luck in your contest!
Claire x
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