One touch,and purity will bath you.
Metamorphosis,to completion.
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Hope it make sense!
A contest entry
- MAKE YOUR OWN QUOTE by Miss Chievous.
600 points, ended July 25, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think as i'm trying to improve my english
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well done and many blessings - just an fyi in your quote bath should be bathe. and yes it makes sense especially to me as i collect angels and have some very special angels in heaven (my parents). best wishes
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great!I think it made purfect sense!
Good job
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i will comment again when you are done
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