How do you really feel?
When you look at me...
when your eyes penetrate mine,
how do you really feel?
I've always known you,
but now you're slipping from me.
We used to be so close,
now you're walking away.
How do you really feel,
as you look my way.
We went through harsh times,
your hand in mine...
but you've taken that away,
when you heard me say.
How do you really feel.
Just tell me the truth.
And when I realized,
you don't love me too...
I fell apart.
We never have moments,
like we did before.
So now you're walking away...
now I know how you feel.
Author notes
I don't really know why I wrote this...I guess it's just my feelings from someone and that's what I want to say, yet I already know the answer.
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Good open feelings to expand on, i suggest a little imagery. When someone makes me feel bad about myself because they dont love me I feel like a troll what doestroll look like? incorperate imgery and personification into your poem color it up to show with words how you feel
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